Go With The Flow: Write With Transition Words and Phrases

One of the most common weaknesses I see intransition words and phrases that will help make your
day-to-daytext more understandable and interesting to the
writing is poor logical flow from one idea or point toreader.
the next. This usually takes the form of a bunch ofFor each one, I have included a typical example of
seemingly unrelated phrases thrown together with littlehow
or no sense of sequence, continuity, orthe word/phrase might be used in a typical
relativity.Although the overall subject may be obvious,sentence.Note that I have capitalized the transition
the wordswords/phrases
to describe it seem to be scattered on the page likefor emphasis and easy identification.CAUSE AND
anEFFECT...THEN, he moved on to the next work
almost random set of unconnected thoughts. On astation.AS A RESULT, the team lost the game.FOR
regularTHIS REASON, she always went home for the
basis, I see letters and reports in which each phraseweekend.THE RESULT WAS always
seems to be independent of the one before and thepredictable.WHAT FOLLOWED was as painful as it
onewas inevitable.IN RESPONSE, he quickly upped the
after, when in reality, there is an actual sequentialante.THEREFORE, the aircraft overshot the
and/or logical flow.Consider the following threerunway.THUS, it was just a matter of time.BECAUSE
sentence example:1. The entire building had to beOF THIS, the results were always the
searched.2. They started the search on the thirdsame.CONSEQUENTLY, he was no longer friends
floor.3. It took three hours to complete thewith Frank.THE REACTION to this event was swift
search.Notice that the three separate statements areand decisive.IN CONTRAST TO...UNLIKE last year, this
all validone was highly profitable.DIFFERENT from this, was
sentences. They convey the bare essential facts ofour approach to manufacturing.IN SPITE OF the dot
thecom bust, the company prospered.ON THE OTHER
situation, but nothing more. In fact, they raise almostHAND, earnings per share have increased.ON THE
more questions than they answer. For example:- WasCONTRARY, the impact was less than
it a serious incident?- Had it ever happened before?-expected.OPPOSING that idea was the move to new
Why did they start on the third floor?- What about thetechnologies.HOWEVER, that approach may actually
first two floors?- How big/high was the building?- Isprove better.CONTRARY to his findings, the revenue
three hours a long time for that?- How long does itpicture is good.NEVERTHELESS, something still
usually take?These are all logical (and obvious)appears to be missing.SEQUENCE AND
questions that theRELATIVITY...THEN, each one followed in numerical
average person might ask when reading a paragraphsequence.IN ADDITION, a fourth material was added
madeto the mix.TO ENUMERATE, first there was the car,
up of the three sentences above.Let's transformsecond the boat,...NEXT in the series was the
these now, using transition phrases:"UNLIKE the"outrigger" brand line.BESIDES THAT, there were two
previous minor incident, this time the entireother possible sources.SIMILARITY AND
building had to be searched. BECAUSE the fire wasCOMPARISON...LIKE always, he took the company on
stilla dangerous course.SAME as before, he managed to
smoking on the first two floors, they had to start onmeet all of the requirements.SIMILAR things were
theknown to happen at certain times.CLOSE to that was
third, working upwards to the tenth, covering the firstthe result of the second round of voting.LIKEWISE,
two floors last. CONSEQUENTLY, it took them a fullthey made similar changes in the factory.ALSO, there
three hours before they finally completed the typicalwere the worker's families to consider.NEAR that one,
two-hour job."Notice the use of the transition words:was where we found the faulty
UNLIKE, BECAUSE,component.EXPLANATION AND EXAMPLE...FOR
and CONSEQUENTLY. Using these three words hasEXAMPLE, last year's model was underpowered.ONE
allowed usSUCH occurrence was last week's power
to easily connect the three independent sentencesoutage.FOR INSTANCE, earnings this year are higher
andthan last.TO ILLUSTRATE, he went to Chicago just to
give them a sense of chronological order and logicalmake his point.ALSO, there is a new approach to
flow.sheet-metal moulding.TO DEMONSTRATE, I will use
They also allow us to answer ALL of the obviousthe new model throughout.The above are just
questions,examples, and there many other such
either with the transition word itself, or by adding atransition words and phrases that are used in
couple more words.In short, transition words/phraseseveryday
have turned three dryconversation and writing. In my opinion, appropriate
independent phrases into a little story that makesuse
senseof these words/phrases is the number one technique
to the reader.These types of words/phrases are idealfor
for allowing onemaking any type of writing flow logically and
to easily connect thoughts, and create logicalclearly.Bottom line: Smooth, orderly and logical
sequencestransitions
between sentences and paragraphs. They are usuallyfrom one thought to the other, one sentence to the
insertednext,
at the beginning of a sentence and normally referand one paragraph to another -- are key to creating
directlyclear
back to the previous sentence and/or paragraphmeaning and flow in any document. Transition words
withoutand
repeating the specific subject.The followingphrases will achieve this for you.
paragraphs list some of the more common